ext_26969 ([identity profile] tl--dr.livejournal.com) wrote on June 27th, 2008 at 02:20 am
So I'll like leave you edit-y thoughts later sometime alright but for right now i just want to reiterate how FUCKING MUCH i FUCKING LOVE the FUCKING WAY you write these FUCKING CHARACTERS FUCKING EACH OTHER. sajkdfsjadfs mindi


"You like me inside of you, don't you, Guts? You want it so much that you hold your breath every time. Maybe I should just leave you here," Griffith worked a second finger inside of him. "Maybe I should just put a ring on you and walk away. Will you admit that you want me then? When you're so consumed with lust that I could shove anything inside of you and make you come?"


dkajsdjfadfa mindi mindi the concept of griffith trying to force guts to just admit he wants him and it's obvious to everyone there but guts is a manly man and won't ever say it god it's just akdjfajsdfadsfadfdfsasa right and then

Guts' head was spinning when Griffith stood up and forced him down for a kiss, sharing the taste of Guts' come with him. Griffith's tongue slid along his, sharing the proof of Guts' lust and Guts tilted his head down into the kiss, lips still bleeding. It was always the same. Always in the moment right after orgasm he would find himself willing and pliant against Griffith's touch.

And he hated him for it.


asdfkajsdflajsdlkadsf he would hate him for it he would he would he would IF HE COULD JUST GO WITH IT THEY MIGHT ACTUALLY BE ABLE TO
IDK
COMMUNICATE OR SOMETHING
AND GUTS MIGHT TELL GRIFFITH THINGS LIKE "YOU KNOW IT REALLY HURT MY FEELIGNS WHEN YOU SAID YOU DIDN'T EVEN THINK OF ME AS A FRIEND"
AND THEN THEY WOULD LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER INSTEAD OF
YKNOW
WHAT ACTUALLY HAPPENED

STUPID GRIFFITH
STUPID GUTS

STUPID SEXY POWER GAMES AND THE STUPID SEXY MEN WHO WRITHE AROUND BENEATH THEM

so what's the next part gonna have in it huh huh huh???????????????????? TELL MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
 
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